List of things to improve my writing

I think that I have to improve my punctuation, like commas and periods.

Also sometimes I think that I miss capitalization in some names, like addresses, dates, etc.

Sometimes I miss semi-colons because i am not really sure when I have to use them and how they work.

transicional words

Conjunctions: although, even though, while, whereas, despite, in spite of...

Adverbial Phrases: owever, on the other hand, what's more...

Capitalization and Puntuation

Capitalize Name
Capitalize Places ( all planets)
Capitalize peoples title ( Doctor, Senator

Puntuate commas, exclamation points

separate compund sentence with a comma, and also use comma for a list
Comma with date nd year but no comma with month and year
When you are going to put what somebody says

Comments on others people preposition projects

Valentina and Claudia Project Of and About prepositions

I was interesting because there was lots of pictures. I could have been more interesting if it had more information.   7

It was persuasive because it showed some examples of how to use the prepositions. It could have been more persuasive if they put more information on it to know what are they.   6

The word choice was good because they didn’t use random words, but could have improved if they used a different word choice.   6

The style was not very clear, but I think it was funny because of the pictures. 5

Total: 24

Pablo, Simon, Joel, and Carlos Prepositions To and For

It was interesting because it was funny and had lots of colors. It could have improved if we brought pictures.   8

It was persuasive because it was funny and it was full of facts and how to use them right or wrong. It could have improved if we put the definition of what it was.  8

Word Choice was good because there were a few sophisticated words. It could have improved if we put better wording.  9

The style was really clear that it was funny, it had a specific style. We could use pictures to support the style.  9

Total: 34

Antonio, Steve, Carlos Prepositions On and From

It was interesting because the title was very attractive. It could have improved if they wrote more things on it and put more color.  7

It was persuasive because it had some pictures. It could have improved if they said what are they? what are they used for?  5

The word choice was normal. It was not very advanced and could have improved a lot.         4

The style was not clear and did not have a style. It was very direct.   3

Total: 19
 
Juan Manuel, Tomas, Alejandra, and Santiago Prepositions At and In

It was interesting because it had lots of facts and examples. I could have improved if they made it more visible.  7

It was persuasive because they explained very well what they were and put some examples. It could have improved if they tell the definition.    7

 The word choice had some hard vocabulary words. It could have improved it they put some relative words. 6

The style was not very creative but I think that it was funny because it made me laugh a little.     6

Total: 26

The game rules are easy first you get a card and read the two sentences then you choose the one that you think it is correct if you get it its a positive point to your final grade.