Personal Entry 2

Today at 12 p.m my grandmother that lives in Seattle will get to Bogotá so she can be at Christmas with my family. On Saturday I am going to Ibague where my cousin is going to graduate from school. All of my family is going.

Personal Entry

On Christmas I am getting a Blade radio control helicopter which I really like. I have watched so many videos of this helicopter that I practically know every part by memory. Another thing I am getting is an I-Pad. I want this I-Pad because I think it's important for school. Instead of taking my computer to school I will take my I-Pad, that is less expensive if I loose it. The last and best thing that I will get is a motorcycle. It's the KTM 200 exc 2012 and I have really looked forward to it like 1 year ago. I am really happy because this Christmas I am getting lots of good gifts.

Content of math poem

Intro
Chorus
Architecture of Bob the builder
Questions
Area
chorus
Perimeter
Bricks
angles
Chorus

Rap song lyrics Eminem-When am gone

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1wYNFfgrXTI&ob=av2e

Have you ever loved someone so much, you'd give an arm for?
Not the expression, no, literally give an arm for?
When they know they're your heart
And you know you were their armour
And you will destroy anyone who would try to harm her
But what happens when karma, turns right around and bites you?
And everything you stand for, turns on you to spite you?
What happens when you become the main source of her pain?
"Daddy look what I made", Dad's gotta go catch a plane
"Daddy where's Mommy? I can't find Mommy where is she?"
I don't know go play Hailie, baby, your Daddy's busy
Daddy's writing a song, this song ain't gonna write itself
I'll give you one underdog then you gotta swing by yourself
Then turn right around in that song and tell her you love her
And put hands on her mother, who's a spitting image of her
That's Slim Shady, yeah baby, Slim Shady's crazy
Shady made me, but tonight Shady's rocka-by-baby...

And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back...

I keep having this dream, I'm pushin' Hailie on the swing
She keeps screaming, she don't want me to sing
"You're making Mommy cry, why? Why is Mommy crying?"
Baby, Daddy ain't leaving no more, "Daddy you're lying
"You always say that, you always say this is the last time
"But you ain't leaving no more, Daddy you're mine"
She's piling boxes in front of the door trying to block it
"Daddy please, Daddy don't leave, Daddy - no stop it!"
Goes in her pocket, pulls out a tiny necklace locket
It's got a picture, "this'll keep you safe Daddy, take it withcha'"
I look up, it's just me standing in the mirror
These *****' walls must be talking, cuz man I can hear 'em
They're saying "You've got one more chance to do right" - and it's tonight
Now go out there and show that you love 'em before it's too late
And just as I go to walk out of my bedroom door
It turns to a stage, they're gone, and this spotlight is on
And I'm singing...

And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back...

Sixty thousand people, all jumping out their seat
The curtain closes, they're throwing roses at my feet
I take a bow and thank you all for coming out
They're screaming so loud, I take one last look at the crowd
I glance down, I don't believe what I'm seeing
"Daddy it's me, help Mommy, her wrists are bleeding,"
But baby we're in Sweden, how did you get to Sweden?
"I followed you Daddy, you told me that you weren't leavin'
"You lied to me Dad, and now you make Mommy sad
"And I bought you this coin, it says 'Number One Dad'
"That's all I wanted, I just want to give you this coin
"I get the point - fine, me and Mommy are going"
But baby wait, "it's too late Dad, you made the choice
"Now go out there and show 'em that you love 'em more than us"
That's what they want, they want you Marshall, they keep.. screamin' your name
It's no wonder you can't go to sleep, just take another pill
Yeah, I bet you will. You rap about it, yeah, word, k-keep it real
I hear applause, all this time I couldn't see
How could it be, that the curtain is closing on me
I turn around, find a gun on the ground, cock it
Put it to my brain and scream "die Shady" and pop it
The sky darkens, my life flashes, the plane that I was supposed to be on crashes and burns to ashes
That's when I wake up, alarm clock's ringin', there's birds singin'
It's Spring and Hailie's outside swinging, I walk right up to Kim and kiss her
Tell her I miss her, Hailie just smiles and winks at her little sister
Almost as if to say..

And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back
And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel no pain
Just smile back...

Figurative Language

Onomatopoeia: “pop”
Simile: You are my sunshine
Rhyme: hall, fall, ball
Personification: The lamp sat on the table
Repetition: “Baby, baby, baby oh”
Hyperbole: He’s the fastest runner, ever!
Alliteration: Peter Piper Picked a peck of pickled peppers
Assonance: He saw a ball far away
Imagery: Appeal to S Senses to create picture in readers mind

Youtube Commercial Analisys

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PmrTDZy3f2M

This video is from Mac Donalds.

It uses 2 famous athletes that eat Mac Donalds to make people want to go because they think that they are cool so it is cool to eat Mac Donalds. 
They want us to see Mac Donalds as a food that famous athletes like so the public also wants to eat it.

9 facts, 3 sources of modern slavery

facts:
1.Today, there are 27 million slaves
2.There are at least 14.500 slaves each year trafficked into U.S
3.The average human slave costs $90
4.There are more slaves today than in any other period in history
5.Slaves work in fields, brothels, homes, mines, restaurants—anywhere slave owners can feed their greed.
6.It is the fastest growing crime on the planet
7.Over the years the slave value has decreased
8.Bonded Labor is the most used kind of slavery and the less known
9.A family of Bonded Labor may cost as little as $90

sources:
1.http://thejustlife.org/home/2008/03/23/top-10-facts-about-modern-slavery/
2.http://www.freetheslaves.net/Document.Doc?id=34
3.http://matadornetwork.com/change/10-shocking-facts-about-global-slavery-in-2008/

Modern slave Mindmap

My Modern Slavery Persuasive Video

Click HERE to watch the video

Ms. Shawn, it you can't watch the video I can show it to you in my time.

Comments on Persuasive videos

Santiago Cabrera

1. The topic was Slavery
2.He wants us to think that the world is gonna change if we don't stop slavery
3.Ethos:He told us facts and knows the subject
Pathos:He was emotional and made us feel bad for slaves
Logos:He had a few facts about slavery
4.He talked and then he showed pictures of slaves
5.It was persuasive because I put attention and made me feel sad
6.He could do a announcement that people tell the police if the see a case like this.

Simon Zapata, Carlos Riascos, and Joel Rabinovich

1.Their topic was modern slavery
2.That slavery is bad and that it should end
3.Ethos:They showed lots of facts about modern slavery
Pathos:It got emotions because of the sad pictures
Logos: They put lots of facts
4.They put sad pictures and facts all the presentiation
5.No it wasn't because the music was bad and it could have improved if they put better music and sadder pictures
6.They could start a camping against slavery



Pablo Ancizar

1.My topic was Modern Slavery
2.That the world has to make a change
3.Ethos:I showed that I am an expert on the topic because I put facts and pictures
Pathos:The emotional part was that I put sad pictures so people felt bad and wanted to do something
Logos:I put a lot of facts showing how bad the situation was
4. First I put pictures of free kids, and then they got worst of slavery, and it also got black and white
5. It was really convincing because it made you fell sad and also got some knowledge about the situation.
6.What I could do would be to start a anti-slavery campaign so that people know that not only one person is interested in the subject  

Storyboard Modern Slavery

Our video is going to show pictures during the video. First good pictures, then bad pictures, and them really bad pictures.

Good Pictures: In the first pictures we are going to show pictures of kids being free and playing.

Bad Pictures: In the second part we are going to show kids being capured and handcuffed.

Really bad pictures: here we are going to show kind working and being treated bad.

Comments on others people preposition projects

Valentina and Claudia Project Of and About prepositions

I was interesting because there was lots of pictures. I could have been more interesting if it had more information.   7

It was persuasive because it showed some examples of how to use the prepositions. It could have been more persuasive if they put more information on it to know what are they.   6

The word choice was good because they didn’t use random words, but could have improved if they used a different word choice.   6

The style was not very clear, but I think it was funny because of the pictures. 5

Total: 24

Pablo, Simon, Joel, and Carlos Prepositions To and For

It was interesting because it was funny and had lots of colors. It could have improved if we brought pictures.   8

It was persuasive because it was funny and it was full of facts and how to use them right or wrong. It could have improved if we put the definition of what it was.  8

Word Choice was good because there were a few sophisticated words. It could have improved if we put better wording.  9

The style was really clear that it was funny, it had a specific style. We could use pictures to support the style.  9

Total: 34

Antonio, Steve, Carlos Prepositions On and From

It was interesting because the title was very attractive. It could have improved if they wrote more things on it and put more color.  7

It was persuasive because it had some pictures. It could have improved if they said what are they? what are they used for?  5

The word choice was normal. It was not very advanced and could have improved a lot.         4

The style was not clear and did not have a style. It was very direct.   3

Total: 19
 
Juan Manuel, Tomas, Alejandra, and Santiago Prepositions At and In

It was interesting because it had lots of facts and examples. I could have improved if they made it more visible.  7

It was persuasive because they explained very well what they were and put some examples. It could have improved if they tell the definition.    7

 The word choice had some hard vocabulary words. It could have improved it they put some relative words. 6

The style was not very creative but I think that it was funny because it made me laugh a little.     6

Total: 26

The game rules are easy first you get a card and read the two sentences then you choose the one that you think it is correct if you get it its a positive point to your final grade.