although, even though, while, whereas, despite, in spite of, however, on the other hand, what's more.
These words are used to connect one idea to the next.
Monday, March 26, 2012
Chosen Theme with partner
friendship can become love
Peeta and Katniss were friends and now peeta feels love for katniss.
Katniss and gale were friends and now katniss is in love.
We think that its tis this because in the hunger games it happens on 2 locations.
Peeta and Katniss were friends and now peeta feels love for katniss.
Katniss and gale were friends and now katniss is in love.
We think that its tis this because in the hunger games it happens on 2 locations.
Theme of Hunger Games
Theme: We should appreciate what we have.
In the hunger games lots of people are very poor.
In the hunger games every year 2people of each district are taken to the hunger games that mught be you.
In the hunger games lots of people are very poor.
In the hunger games every year 2people of each district are taken to the hunger games that mught be you.
Thursday, March 8, 2012
Parts of Proposal: Facts
In our invention we researched about fans and big fans. We found out that fans can have 3 or 4 blades depending on the type of fan. Ceasing fans have 5-7 blades because it's a different type of fan. A jet turbine mat have even 60 blades because its also another kind of fan. Our Hover Car will have a fan that has 4 blades.
Parts of Proposal: Invention Description
Our invention will be a flying car, in other words a Hover Car. In our invention the Hover Car will fly ith a fan and the fan will be versatile so it moves forward. The fan will be big and will be at the bottom of the car. The fan will have a gasoline motor to make it turn. A maximum of 4 people will fit in the car and will have a normal car appearance.
Because the car will look like a normal car we will need a light chassis. We can buy this from any good car brand. The car has to me light so the fan doesn't have to use so much power to make the car float. The inside of the car will also be similar to a normal car but instead of a steering wheel there will be a joystick like in a helicopter. Using the joystick makes the car go forward, back, right, and/or left.
Because the car will look like a normal car we will need a light chassis. We can buy this from any good car brand. The car has to me light so the fan doesn't have to use so much power to make the car float. The inside of the car will also be similar to a normal car but instead of a steering wheel there will be a joystick like in a helicopter. Using the joystick makes the car go forward, back, right, and/or left.
List of things to improve my writing
I think that I have to improve my punctuation, like commas and periods.
Also sometimes I think that I miss capitalization in some names, like addresses, dates, etc.
Sometimes I miss semi-colons because i am not really sure when I have to use them and how they work.
Also sometimes I think that I miss capitalization in some names, like addresses, dates, etc.
Sometimes I miss semi-colons because i am not really sure when I have to use them and how they work.
Tuesday, March 6, 2012
Themes in hunger games
1. We should appreciate what we have.
In the hunger games lots of people are very poor.
In the hunger games every year 2people of each district are taken to the hunger games that mught be you.
2.friendship can become love
Peeta and Katniss were friends and now peeta feels love for katniss.
Katniss and gale were friends and now katniss is in love.
3. War is bad because everything is destroyed
There was a war and then the capitol was very mean and created the hunger games
After the war lots of people gad died and families split.
In the hunger games lots of people are very poor.
In the hunger games every year 2people of each district are taken to the hunger games that mught be you.
2.friendship can become love
Peeta and Katniss were friends and now peeta feels love for katniss.
Katniss and gale were friends and now katniss is in love.
3. War is bad because everything is destroyed
There was a war and then the capitol was very mean and created the hunger games
After the war lots of people gad died and families split.
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